Why do people travel? Use examples and reasons to support your argument.
Today, There are so many reasons for why do people travel. And, Some of them for work, a few parts of them for wonder, and some parts them for good workers who working a big company.
First of all, we would think behaviours of people such as lying, wondering, etc. Almost all people in the world have that behaviour which is wondering, and they often wonder some places such palaces, parks, buildings. And, they want to figure out their wonders and so they usually travel these places.
Also, there so many various works in the world, some kinds of works have a lot of stable work places, and some parts of them urge people to travel a lot. For example, people who work in computer company is always consume their time in the office, but if the person is a pilot he or she must to travel and fly much.
In addition, some people have not enough friends because their living places and conditions do not opt nothing about friends. And, when they are alone they have more stresses than in crowded, and they have more health problems such as mental and brain diseases. So, they have to solve these disease, finding friends and travelling for finding friends are solutions.
Moreover, productivity and effectivity are necessary for bosses of companies, because their companies want to increase their incomes. There are different types of improvements methods such as giving extra money or salary, talking with their member kindly, and some parts of big companies provide their workers travelling options. These types of techniques improve their workers' concentrations up.
In conclusion, taking account of all reasons, although some people do not want to travel a lot, they could travel much, and they urged by their bosses, friend, families, teachers, etc.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... but if the person is a pilot he or she must to travel and fly much. In addition, s...
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Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: NOT_NOTHING[1]
Message: Double negation. You probably should say 'anything'.
Suggestion: anything
...living places and conditions do not opt nothing about friends. And, when they are alone...
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Line 7, column 286, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this disease' or 'these diseases'?
Suggestion: this disease; these diseases
... brain diseases. So, they have to solve these disease, finding friends and travelling for fin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93288590604 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36631199507 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543624161074 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4472445518 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138191456616 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666630779653 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900028186187 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083711393014 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413370446965 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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