Why do people work?
There are a plethora of reasons explaining why people work. Everyone has something particular in their mind that encourages them to pursue a career. Therefore, I am not able to discuss all the motives people have for working, but I will point out the most outstanding reasons from my point of view.
The first reason and maybe the most prominent one is related to the people's need for making money somehow to meet their daily life requirements. Depending on the quality of their life, people are used to planning and determining how much money they need to achieve a certain standard of life. Some people feel complacent when only their basic needs, such as food, accommodation, and clothing, are covered. However, others might prefer to have more sophisticated lifestyles. Some are attached to regular traveling, and some feel they should change the furniture and equipment of their house once a year. Anyway, maintaining a lifestyle of any quality level requires people to carry out some kind of work and acquire a certain amount of money. Otherwise, they may face many financial, mental, or even physical difficulties, just like now that many people have lost their job after the emergence of the Coronavirus crisis. According to statistical data, the conflicts between family members have risen significantly mainly as a consequence of financial problems.
Secondly, one of the most determining factors in a healthy and happy life is having the feeling of being helpful as an individual. Everyone needs to be regarded as an asset in society, and having a suitable job helps people satisfy this need. People surely don't like to stay home and waste their time playing computer games or reading newspapers. Time is more valuable, and not everything is worth it. Thus, doing work not only helps up earn some money but also gives us the feeling of being valuable to society.
Thirdly, doing any type of job definitely helps up learn important personal and professional skills, which we can use in our personal life too. Doing a job improves our ability to communicate with other people, to play our role, to deal successfully with problems, to be considerate towards others, and to work and think together. It helps us get out of our comfort zone and try something new. Without having a job, we remain isolated and miss many opportunities to improve and develop our capabilities. Not only do our technical achievements help us do our personal tasks at home, but also communication and collaboration skills acquired during work help us make good judgments and decisions in everyday life.
In summary, based on the aforementioned arguments, there is a myriad of reasons that persuade us to work and play a role in society. Some of them, such as offering opportunities to make money, to feel valuable, and to learn important life skills, are mentioned above. However, that was a story in a nutshell. Actually, there are also a group of people who have no clear and certain reasons for working. They do work just as a habit. Sometimes, they are so attached to their work that they never think about it.
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One of the most important…
One of the most important aspects of leading a healthy and happy life is an individual's capacity to feel that they are contributing to the well-being of others. Everyone has the need to be valued as a contribution to society cuphead, and having a job that's right for them is a big help in satisfying this need.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...people satisfy this need. People surely dont like to stay home and waste their time ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, in summary, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2581.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 523.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93499043977 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77667775377 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537284894837 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 829.8 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4377027386 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5925925926 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3703703704 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07407407407 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278921362598 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759300400995 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987313022429 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158187723827 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034955901831 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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