When people succeed it's because of hard work or luck?
In the modern era, discovering the main cause of success has raised a lot of debate among people. Some people hold the view that success is caused by luck. They believe that the luckier you are, the more likely you are to achieve your goals. However, others may take the opposite viewpoint and argue that the quality of being successful is not caused immediately and accidentally and is the result of several years of endeavors. I personally favor the latter opinion over the former one. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoint through some notable reasons.
My first reason is that as far as I know, all famous celebrities mostly attribute their success to the hard work and efforts they have made. Other factors like genetics, social class, and training may indeed be partly responsible for someone's success. However, these parameters are shared by a myriad of people, so why do only a few humans thrive in their professional or academic careers? What distinguishes flourishing people from others is the level of effort and perseverance they devote to their work. For example, Cristiano Ronaldo, one of the most popular and prosperous contemporary athletes and a role model for a large number of juveniles throughout the world, is widely known for the severe physical exercises he has done since his childhood. Had he already gave up his efforts, he could not surely have maintained his physical fitness at such a high standard.
The second reason is that from my point of view, although luck has temporary and intermittent consequences, hardworking can result in long-lasting benefits that continue to exist even throughout the whole someone's lifetime. What guarantees your permanent success is the amount of energy you have put into an activity. Not only does hardworking directly help people pursue their dreams, but also it gives them a lot of confidence that allows them to overcome obstacles and move forward. The effort actually acts like a torch that lights the way to success. That's why people who merely have an uncanny knack for thriving in an activity may once reach a certain level of success. However, they will ultimately be forgotten as the short-lived results of their natural talents start to disappear.
Lastly, the key to success is making use of special knowledge, experience, and skills essential for that particular type of work while trying to recognize and develop inner abilities. These items can only be achieved through making a lot of effort and showing great determination, not by chance. What makes outstanding people different from others is primarily the skills they improve over years. With such skills, people feel as if they can take advantage of highly advanced weapons during a war against potential obstacles and problems confronting them.
To sum up, based on the aforementioned arguments, there are a myriad of reasons that convince me to support the idea that success cannot be achieved by chance and needs a high level of effort and perseverance. Some of the reasons, such as looking at the life of successful people, permanent results of hardworking, and acquiring enough knowledge, experience, and skills, are mentioned above. However, that was like a story in a nutshell. Actually, there are some other reasons and examples challenging the claim, which are not mentioned above. All in all, I firmly believe that success entails several years of hard work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: celebrities
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'someones'' or 'someone's'?
Suggestion: someones'; someone's
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Suggestion: That's
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Suggestion: myriads
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, lastly, look, may, second, so, while, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2866.0 1977.66487455 145% => OK
No of words: 564.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08156028369 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87326216964 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75328292642 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 308.0 212.727598566 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54609929078 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 900.9 618.680645161 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6337476438 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.148148148 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07407407407 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102612931609 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0290974252587 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462731937242 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577224032948 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104642238797 0.0645574589148 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 148.0 86.8835125448 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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