Some people prefer to plan their activities very carefully. Others choose not to make any plan for their free time. Compare benefits of planning with not planning. Which one do you prefer?
In the modern era, due to the development of entertainment facilities and methods, there are a wide variety of activities and events people can spend their leisure time doing. To carry out such activities, some people plan in advance while others leave essential decisions to last minutes. I personally prefer to carefully make plans for my free time for a plethora of reasons. I will elaborate on my viewpoint below through three noticeable reasons.
My first reason is that sometimes, we need to make some preparations and arrangements when deciding to do an activity or go somewhere. Deciding ahead of time what we want to do definitely eliminates the risk of forgetting to bring required devices and tools, to make reservations if necessary, to collect significant information about the particular activity we intend to do or the particular place we determine to go and things like them. The last time I went on a tour, a myriad of weird and unexpected events happened. My friends and I had a long weekend and although we had planned initially to gather together and play an amusing computer game, suddenly, one of my friends came up with the idea of going on a tour held by the student services center of the university just half an hour before the tour's bus left the campus. That was like a mess. Everyone was running back and forth to pack their bags. Finally, we arrived in front of the bus just on time. However, we could manage to just dress and bring a couple of things or so along for a two-day trip.
The second reason is that not only planning ahead of time does help us prepare well for an activity, it also gives us calmness and peace of mind. I personally feel the most comfortable when finding everything in order. I believe that it is a great way to prevent unnecessary stresses and keep us from being disturbed just before a relief, such as a trip or a concert. This way, we don't have to keep one eye on our watch while driving to see whether we are late or not. Sometimes, these stresses may continue to exist and later stop us from enjoying, say, the movie we are watching or the music we are trying to listen to.
Thirdly, well-organized plans and arrangements can help us avoid unwanted mistakes during the activity, which may waste a lot of time or even disrupt the activity itself. If we don't spend enough time, for example, finding the map of the setting we intend to go we will be likely to get lost on the way and even end up turning back. This is especially important when we are going somewhere or doing something for the first time.
To wrap it up, based on the aforementioned arguments, there are many reasons why I prefer to plan ahead of time rather than decide what I should do at the last minute. Some of them are mentioned above, such as eliminating the risk of leaving the required devices behind, making us feel calm and relaxed, and avoiding unnecessary mistakes. However, that was like a story in a nutshell. Actually, there are some other reasons and examples challenging the claim, which are not mentioned above. All in all, I firmly believe that make preparations and arrangements in advance will help us have an excellent and enjoyable experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, thirdly, well, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2632.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 568.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6338028169 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88187981987 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67958209176 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 212.727598566 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515845070423 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 858.6 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8763581816 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.28 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.72 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246611942985 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662732255632 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790896362465 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154160993147 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878812879565 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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