Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When people succeed, it is entirely because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with their success. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Success is the goal of everyone trying to achieve a purpose in life. Some people believe it is dependent on hard work and has nothing to do with luck, while others believe otherwise. In my opinion, I agree with the stance that success is a product of hard work and not luck for the following reason
Success requires a level of knowledge before it can be achieved. In life, we need to spend time understanding a course before we can perform well in it. For instance, my personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. Two years ago, I spent two days preparing for my final year oral presentation. I watched videos on how to present an amazing project. Initially, I was anxious, but after much practice, I became very stable. I understood how to begin my presentation and how to perfectly end it. After the presentation, everyone applauded my effort, and I was awarded an excellent score. In contrast, my friend believed success is all about luck and decided not to read anything about how to make a good presentation. Unfortunately for him, he was sent out of the conference room, and as a result, he had to repeat the presentation. If he had prepared as I did, he would not have failed woefully.
In conclusion, success is a product of hard work because it requires a level of effort to achieve it.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 234.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63247863248 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89754935108 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57264957265 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0652570607 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4285714286 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160831262281 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050298819192 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877945630268 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165204157381 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138511783133 0.0645574589148 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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