why do people travel?
These days traveling has become one of the most important aspects of the people's life in developed countries because of these reasons:
First, modern man kind doesn’t know how to spend his leisure time and, traveling has become one of the popular options among people because it has great impact on mental freshness and it will decrease anxiety and other disorders so it could be a beneficial choice for spending free time.
Second, great diversity of cultures and nations in the world is interesting for example when I went to India couple of years ago I saw their different religious festivals and I became astonished because of their great cultural variation. visiting that ceremonies left a great influence on my way of thinking. So familiarity with new cultures and nations is one of the fascinating reasons for traveling.
Third, finding new friends is one of my popular hobbies which is so precious to me. by traveling I have found different lovely friends and I have increased my communication skills which it could be a great help for me in my life. Hence, traveling could be a great solution for increasing different communicational skills and it improves emotional intelligence too.
In conclusion due to the aforementioned reasons, people travel because of its interesting, beneficial and special nature and influence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...ne of the most important aspects of the peoples life in developed countries because of ...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Visiting
...ause of their great cultural variation. visiting that ceremonies left a great influence ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, second, so, third, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 218.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14220183486 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94208397106 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596330275229 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.531673501 48.9658058833 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.125 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130397177258 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549640833501 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644528173181 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933580372011 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601576098886 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 10.002688172 275% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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