It is better to do one project first and then begin to do another than to do several projects at the same time?
A term of project is defined which is done by workers, students or any other people where they work or study. this may be game to children. The person have to do in scheduling time.
First of all, it is made until last day, i think this finishing time would be before the last day. because, there are any complications which is shown by project worker who gives it to project owner. For example, when the person want to send it to the professor by e-mail there may be an internet connection problem so it could not been sent.
Second, the project efficiency is the most important for a succesful of staffs. For getting positive feedback, they should do high performance, and they should be hard working. And, for better job, they have to concentrate harshly. because, if there are not high relation to study in the environment they will not get good grade, salary or word which is told by children's family.
Also, in some job environments there are several tasks, so this companies build them at the same time with same workers. But this tires workers, because they must to work long hours. The tasks would be less effective, so workers and bosses would be bad.
In my opinion, taking account of all reasons people should not do multi project at the same, one project approach is the best technique for working on project who is made by employee, student or a young.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, for example, i think, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 245.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59591836735 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41278007807 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595918367347 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0582389576 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4285714286 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247951460227 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789289157313 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894072307717 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143489935244 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822772211517 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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