Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
SPENDING TIME WITH SPORTS
There are several kind of sports nowadays. Some of these sports are done by children. Because they like when they do these. It gives them some advantages and i think one disadvantage.
First of all, all children like funny things like playing game, doing sports or etc in their daily life. These sometimes would be with friend sometimes not. But, they always consume their time with this type of sport or game. This give them positive feelings.
Also, doing sport supply any health achievements. For example, when people in the depression they need sports, because it decreases blood pressure and mental illness. After practising sport people feel more comfortable and enjoyable.
In addition, some parents want that their children have to sports job like soccer, basketball player. Because, people earn more money or rights when they get a job which is about sports especially football in this era. There are many football club in countries and opponents. So many money are received from advertisement and tv broadcasts. I can named it money environment where doing sports.
In contrast, there is one disadvantages that practising sports causes tiredness and it decresas children's motivation to studying lesson. So, they should not doing sport while their exam time. If they do that they may fail their education.
In my opinion, practising sports has several advantages than opposite approach if children do good schedule. If not, this causes them unsuccessfull grade. So children should doing sport in their free time.
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...ays consume their time with this type of sport or game. This give them positive f...
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...le feel more comfortable and enjoyable. In addition, some parents want that thei...
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... not doing sport while their exam time. If they do that they may fail their educat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, in contrast, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 250.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58271485069 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.125724905 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.3181818182 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.3636363636 20.6045352989 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148509064489 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515361208322 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412634604351 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908421327374 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035021876801 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 58.1214874552 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.81 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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