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If anybody want to live with other people who are friend them or not, they should choose carefully.Because a roommate have different types of characteristics, some of these are important and some others not.I think choosing roommate is a decision-making process which must be done carefully.

First of all, honesty is good kind of behaviour for me and may be for others,people must be honest and the roommate too to each other, i think this is the most important characteristic in our world.For example, some people speak friends about their problems or their failures, these people usually be their roommates, these speakings must be in the secret.If the roommate be dishonest their secret information will be everywhere.

Also, the cooking or any other homework such like cleaning, washing etc. usually could be a problem, because there are not any people in the room in anytime, so roommates often could be hungry for that reason.There must be the person who can cook well.So, the roommate should know cooking.

In addition, some roommates could be in the same school, and may be the same class, some of them are clever but some are not.There are several hard school project in their lessons.So, they might need help from roommates.For that reason, if I would like to choose the roommate they should be clever.

Furthermore, i like fun and joke, sometimes i would like to join any social activities such as party, playing computer games etc.And sometimes i can invite my friends for doing these type of activities in my home or room.When i make the party in our common room my roommate would not be boring and annoyed, so my roommate would be a fun, and my roommate should be social.

In my opinion, there are four characteristics whose has roommates.The honesty, knowing homeworks, clever and social.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98684210526 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88719112221 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532894736842 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.1344086022 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.237180572 48.9658058833 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.571428571 100.406767564 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.4285714286 20.6045352989 211% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.5714285714 5.45110844103 341% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196362103465 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881854843081 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412643912233 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100536617288 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225908916222 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 11.7677419355 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.1575268817 186% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.55 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.002688172 290% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.0537634409 191% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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