What do you want most in a friend - someone who is intelligent, someone who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of these characteristics is most important to you?
Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.
No one can deny the fact that friends are the integral part of our life as we tend to be close with them and shares everything more than we do it to our parents. In the given scenario, it is perceived that, what qualities do we require most in a friend? Whether it is a intelligent or good sense of humor or reliability? Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that undoubtedly all these attributes are must in a good friend yet if I have to choose any one then it would definitely be reliability. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, friends are the one which whom we spend most of our time and once we get attached, we urge to share every single matter with them so we need to be mindful while choosing as they are like our choosen family. Owing to this, it is imperative to select wisely so that we could share anything without having to fear. Drawing from my own experience, I have a best friend and we share every secrets. No matter what, we are susceptible to be there for each other. We do not back bite about each other as well. I share everything with her about what I am going through and she loves me unconditionally. Beacuse of this we have a strong relation and most importantly no one could break us apart. Therefore, having a best friend who is reliable and bolster you in each and every situation is really a boon .
Secondly, friend who is not trust worthy is good for nothing as they are likely to talk nonsense about you and exactly the opposite with you. To be more precsie, being friend with such people is far better to alone since there would be no one to back fire you. I have witnessed this in my own life. When I was in school I have a friend who tend to pretend herself to be a good friend of mine. However, one day I found that she did same to other as well. Not only this, she back bite of me to another friend and vice-versa. Besides, the only intention behind doing this is to remain in good books of all. As a matter of fact, this disloyal behavior lead her to be left alone since she betrayed all of her companions. No one will prefer to be friend with such person. Hence, honesty is the key in any relationship so as to retain relation with our dear ones
All things considered, friend must be a full packet of distinct qualities yet above them all, loyalty is the one. In the absence of this attribute, no relation could flourish so is the friendship too. Thus, we have to be mindful while choosing friend because you not just making friends to pass time, in reality you are choosing unbiological family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, i feel, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32244897959 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46396960457 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473469387755 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0841629425 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.72 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174388480174 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574643107412 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506033295583 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118588606118 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025110439294 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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