For any business to be successful, it must spend a lot of money on advertising
An Advertising is an important and a necessary for businesses which selling products on everywhere and everytime.And There are different types of methods on that issue.All of these methods need more or less money.
First of all, the advertising is the most necessity title, and they are used in all environment areas where productions are sold.There would be good and the best products but if sellers do not advertise their materials which will have not been sold enough and effectively.Although factories or companies have workers who have good quality abilities there would not be enough selling rate if there are not good advertising.
Also, nowadays different companies use different approaches for advertising such as website,tv shows,radio programs etc.For radio or tv programs there will be good speaking person who explaining their products, and for that person they give money off more.And if the bosses want to show their products on internet they must to use a website.A programmer need for writing the website.This programmer people must have been had good writing skills, and for taking them employee must pay more money.
In addition, as we said there must be good advertising approaches, but may be company should create their own advertising team for organizing their activities which sell tool and equipments.This approach could be much efficient than others, because it reduces paying money and it brings flexibility to bosses, and so they want to choose that.
In my opinion, taking account of all reasons and advantages there should be advertising if bosses want to sell much more products.As we mean, good and productive advertising techniques need much more money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, in addition, such as, first of all, in my opinion, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 52.1666666667 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 269.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31598513011 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97655093136 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546468401487 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.1344086022 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.790333509 48.9658058833 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 286.0 100.406767564 285% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.8 20.6045352989 261% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.8 5.45110844103 345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266954515533 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155338440415 0.076458572812 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519074197893 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155338440415 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519074197893 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.5 11.7677419355 259% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 58.1214874552 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 10.1575268817 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 10.002688172 305% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.0537634409 231% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.247311828 303% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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