Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
history is one of the subjects that may be boring for some people and many student try to escape from learning it. they might find it ineffectual in their major and future career so they demand to substitute it with other courses. However, in my point of view history knwledge is integral for everybody and all the students should have knowledge in this field mainly because of the following reasons.
First an foremost, knowledge about history is part of general knowledge that everyone should know. they should know not only about the history their own home land but also about others'. it is in some terms similar to importance of learning basic mathematics for every one. some may never use mathematical perations beyond summation in their life but everyone must know the basics abouts math in case sometime it may be needed. history knwledge is the same; it may be needed in different part of our life such as visiting a historic site, tending to attract a tourist to visit our country etc.
Secondly, history of land has the influence on the culture and beliefes of its people. Thus, history of our country affects of our today's lives. A man can look into history to see the origins of cultural problems and try to solve them. also many frays between countries originate from their wars and conflicts in the past. To underestand the source of political actions in our country we should know about its history. Moreover, even the traditions in our own family may be connected to historic events. so history has a major role in our modern life nd we should be aware of that to come up with solutions to today's problems.
Additionally, history is a tresure of experiences of people who live before us. we can learn from them to deal with problems we face in our modern life. To make my point clear, remember the effet of religion pressure during mid time in Europe which led to Ronessans. we can learn from this experience that politics should be separated from religion and religion should be optional for people without any pressure from government. Otherwise it will make unsatisfation between people with different ideas which might cause rebellions in our country.
All in all, from what I have disscussed above, the knowledge in history is essential for future generations who will control and manage our contry's future. it will make help them making wiser decisions for the country and lead the country to a prosperity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87350835322 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51776289372 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513126491647 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9074397397 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8181818182 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0454545455 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95454545455 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147946454043 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454444993176 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337014220645 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903859461986 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337429714765 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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