Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, most people, in their relationship, want their partners to tell the truth in any circumstances. I agree with the statement that telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
Firstly, trust is the most crucial consideration in any relationship. Human beings are a social organism who live together and communicate with each other. Because of the structures of man-kind populations, indeed complex, as an instinct, people tend to find ones who are trustworthy. In fact, trust became a vital need in a good relationship. Moreover, always telling the truth brings trust whether it will disappoint the partner in the relationship. Thus, people must always tell the truth in any relationship to live together.
Secondly, always telling the truth would decrease remarkably, the number of fights between two or more people, where regard is the main medium in the conversations. The enormous amount of the arguments results from people who insistently lie to anyone. In fact, that is misunderstood of the person because of the ones who explain themselves wrong to others. Thus, if people as a whole would quit telling lie, indeed always telling the truth, relationships become loveable and trusted.
Finally, people should always tell the truth in any relationship between them due to the reasons mentioned. Since trust is the most vital consideration in relationship, human-beings need to trust each other to live in a social environment. Additionally, it would decrease the number of arguments in relationships.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, in fact, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 43.0788530466 21% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 243.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43209876543 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20298405295 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 212.727598566 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502057613169 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1052270482 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.0 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327696183969 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129466953335 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132934258901 0.0737576698707 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236701480068 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102005730489 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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