Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Consider always telling the truth as the most important element in relationship seems to be a bit impractical. it is essential but definitely not the most important consideration among others. For example, people's feelings and the results when telling the truth should be considered at the same time. And it is not wise to dinimish the importance of people's feeling and simply focus on a single area in relationship beterrn people.
Most people would agree that telling truth is important when making connection with people because we can't consider someone a friend of mine if he or she is not sincere at all. it means that in order to make a stronger connection with people, we need to show who we are and how we think truly and sincerely. And most of the time, it seems to work in relationship between people.
Although telling truth seems to be a perfect way, sometimes it could be hurting. In some situation, we need to consider other's feelings, especially for the closest one's. For example, when someone really close, like a really good friend, ask you about how you think about his or her essay that he or she put a lot of efforts in. it would be mean and unwise to say something negative or critical even if the article is far from good. The most important consideration in this kind of situation is not telling the truth but support. friends need our support and we can't deny that. And that is why what they think and how they feel should be our consideration.
In relationship between people, truthfulness is important, so is the feelings of other's. it would be more mature to consider both at the same time. saying that telling the truth is the most important consideration would be too strong.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74418604651 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69370278643 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488372093023 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7088445548 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41176470588 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219809251242 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870037699069 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844330628924 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152128305733 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348844494386 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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