Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In the foreseeing future, there are going to be more cars in use in the world, in my opinion. Many people drive to school or drive to work by daily basis and the population on earth is still growing. So, the need of cars should be at much higher level, which would encourage car makers to produce more cars for people.
Additionally, the growing population not only happens in the country but also in the city. That cause more needs for living place and consequently brings the rent price to a higher place. And unacceptable rent price force people moving from the city to the suburban area. Without the supports of the downtown subway system, they need to buy a car for transportation. As long as the problems exist, there are going to be more people driving.
The relatively lower car price also help the trend. car makers, like Toyota, are work their best to
automatic production reduce the cost and price of cars
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Car
...ly lower car price also help the trend. car makers, like Toyota, are work their bes...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ers, like Toyota, are work their best to automatic production reduce the cost and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, so, still, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 43.0788530466 9% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 1977.66487455 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 164.0 407.700716846 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67073170732 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 4.48103885553 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43446983285 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 212.727598566 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 618.680645161 38% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.7414768269 48.9658058833 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.6 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109922017596 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439438457572 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463893564764 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654583938778 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340645161702 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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