Television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Television advertising is one of the effective means for saling products. We can easily see celebrities drinking a specific brand of drinks or commercial telling people cereals are great for health. However, there are some people begin to question that if it it appropriate for some people, especially for those who have age less than five.
Kids are not like us, neither of their brain functions nor their minds are mature. they tend to believe what they saw or what grown-ups told them. And sometimes, it is dangerous for them to believe something that is not reality. For example, when Superman flying in the sky, holding bag of candy and told us that it is what gives him the ability to fly in the advertisement. Children would possibly find it hard to differentiate the reality and the fantasy, which could leads to misleading of their knowledgement.
Moreover, in some extreme circumstances, if kids believe they can fly without any instruments, they could fall from the roof trying to use their invisible wings to fly in the sky. There must be some kinds of signs to warn these kids that they can not do this at their home without any help of adults.
Also, advertisement for saling fast food could do harm to kids' health. For example, kids would see the commercials that tells them how happy they could be in the playground whithin Mcdonalds', drinking coke and eating high calories burgers.
It should be banned from the children, or at least some warning following the advertisement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
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Message: Did you mean 'appropriates'?
Suggestion: appropriates
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...he reality and the fantasy, which could leads to misleading of their knowledgement. ...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'kid'.
Suggestion: kid
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, at least, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 256.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86328125 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70298669715 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5859375 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5758011013 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7692307692 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0838067388754 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331816734748 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343881870274 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0562802253719 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382314365004 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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