Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is, the most important consideration in any relationship.
Truth is the foundation of a healthy relationship. Personally, I believe that it is extremely important to tell truth with people you love and respect. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, people in a relationship should know everything about each other, whether it is a good or a bad aspect. If they know that their partner is truthful to them then they can trust their partner which will certainly strengthen their relation. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About a few years ago, me and my sister were very close and we would often share secrets with each other. One time I had to visit my friend but I also had to help her shopping so I lied to her telling that I had to study. I visited my friend and unfortunately, we were at the same mall and my sister saw me. She didn't say anything but she could not trust me wholeheartedly since that day. As a result, our relation took a toll and we couldn't be as open as we used to be. For this reason, I believe that it is necessary to always be truthful in a relationship.
Secondly, a relationship based on lies doesn't last long. It is evident that partners who lie to each other, sooner or later, fall apart. It is required that partners be open to each other and the relationship be founded on veracity. For instance, when a friend of mine got into a relationship, he had lied that he was an actor. But, later on, when his partner found out that he had lied, they broke up. The relationship's sole foundation was lies and consequently, it didn't last long. If he had told the truth in the beginning then the end might have been different.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that it is a must that partners in a relationship be truthful to each other. This is because people in a relationship should know the truth about each other, and because truthfulness leads to a long-term relationship.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., whether it is a good or a bad aspect. If they know that their partner is truthfu...
^^
Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to shop' or 'shop'.
Suggestion: to shop; shop
...it my friend but I also had to help her shopping so I lied to her telling that I had to ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 621, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...the same mall and my sister saw me. She didnt say anything but she could not trust me...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 743, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...result, our relation took a toll and we couldnt be as open as we used to be. For this r...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... Secondly, a relationship based on lies doesnt last long. It is evident that partners ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
...of mine got into a relationship, he had lied that he was an actor. But, later on, wh...
^^^^
Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
... when his partner found out that he had lied, they broke up. The relationships sole ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 468, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...oundation was lies and consequently, it didnt last long. If he had told the truth in ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 485, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s and consequently, it didnt last long. If he had told the truth in the beginning ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44915254237 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78512880303 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511299435028 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3261407768 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.0 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157867795337 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543065288526 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063150424303 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128584154824 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752410213307 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., whether it is a good or a bad aspect. If they know that their partner is truthfu...
^^
Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to shop' or 'shop'.
Suggestion: to shop; shop
...it my friend but I also had to help her shopping so I lied to her telling that I had to ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 621, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...the same mall and my sister saw me. She didnt say anything but she could not trust me...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 743, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...result, our relation took a toll and we couldnt be as open as we used to be. For this r...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... Secondly, a relationship based on lies doesnt last long. It is evident that partners ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
...of mine got into a relationship, he had lied that he was an actor. But, later on, wh...
^^^^
Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
... when his partner found out that he had lied, they broke up. The relationships sole ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 468, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...oundation was lies and consequently, it didnt last long. If he had told the truth in ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 485, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s and consequently, it didnt last long. If he had told the truth in the beginning ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44915254237 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78512880303 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511299435028 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3261407768 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.0 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157867795337 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543065288526 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063150424303 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128584154824 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752410213307 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.