Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To be successful at work or at school, we must be creative.
Success is the word which we called when you achieve your aim. Being successful is everyones dream at school life or career life. While some people believe that without creativity person can not be successful, but I do not agree with them. In my personal opinion hardworking, perseverance and luck are main reasons behind the success.
First, without hardworking people can not achieve his purpose. For instance, if search people who successful at his career we would find that all had worked to much to reach their today positions. For instance, most todays CEO are hardworked and they did not given up even they failed. Failures are should be the most important things in our lives because if we could learn from failures no one could not be able to prevent us to achieve our goals.
Secondly, if humankind not be persistence we would not have today technology. Hardworking is the one of the main reason behind the success but perseverance is the biggest supporter of hardworking to be succesfull. For instance, imagine that you want to get 1400 from SAT you must work hard but if you are not perseverance you will not work hard for your goal. If you are not persistent you can not encourage yourself to work hard.
Lastly, except those reasons there is backstage hero of success is luck. You could be diligent and perseverance but you can not success without luck. For instance, you were preparing for your job interview more than 3 months and you realy want to get that job but unfortunately you excited to much while interviewing and you failed. In that condition you worked hard and you were diligent but you failed because you were not had chance.
In conclusion, even though creativity is awesome ability, I strongly believe that you would not be successful without hardworking, being perseverance and being lucky. These are playing main roles behind the success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ul, but I do not agree with them. In my personal opinion hardworking, perseverance and luck are ...
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...areer we would find that all had worked to much to reach their today positions. Fo...
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Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e you will not work hard for your goal. If you are not persistent you can not enco...
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Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... than 3 months and you realy want to get that job but unfortunately you excited t...
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Line 7, column 293, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... that job but unfortunately you excited to much while interviewing and you failed....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be successful without hardworking, being perseverance and being lucky. These are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65727186227 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484375 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2890788743 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1111111111 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351814000264 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113105060621 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696236798096 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21101590869 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573798315889 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.