Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
No one can deny the important role of planning in people's living standards. In this regard, an individual's opinions are divided as to whether in the modern and complex world, it is essential to have the ability to plan at a younger age or not. I am in the conviction that ability for planning and organization should be training by parents in childhood. For a number of reasons and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
My primary reason is that with learning to plan in a younger age kids understand that time is a precious gift. I mean, when kids training about planning methods with play they be more aware of the importance of time and understand that if they want to become successful, time and planning are two critical factors in their life. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, when I was a little girl, my parents were trying hard to educate me on having the ability to plan and organize. You know with that basic skills I never have a problem in school cause I managed my duty on time and its advantages are with me until now.
Second, planning skills improve a kid's personality. If we look at our surrounding with meticulous vision, we probably see that popular people are more planners than others. These kinds of people have different golds for their future and their personality are desirable for public. I strongly believe in most of these characters you can discover the ability to plan and organize more than others. According to the study at New York university motivation and having a positive view about the future has a direct connection with characteristic of basic knowledge such as planning skill. So, organization talents help individuals to have better performance in their social life.
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'kids'' or 'kid's'?
Suggestion: kids'; kid's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, so, as to, i mean, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78412698413 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73756102449 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546031746032 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6192263263 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.466666667 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295219197166 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957166895371 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442321078919 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203523840163 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368484701859 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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