Extended Family
In my opinion, extended family is not so important as was in the past. I think some basical changes have a important role. Some critical changes like peretent of internet and television and increaseing of finantial level between modern families.
The first and the most exquisite reason is that, role of internet and television. today internet is one of the nondepartable aspect. in the past, families need someone like aunt or grandpa for guiding and learning of childran or parents use of thier experiance for improve thier lifestyle but today internet can solve any quastions and creat a perfect situation for learning of kids and consiquanitly, extended familes disappear.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that, finantial level of familes. Goverments in some of countries give good funds to familes for affored and growing up thier children. Some finantial helpes like this make fale the role of others and change familes smaller than past. for example when i was little girl we lived with my grandparentsand when we were wants to rented a new home, they help us finantialy.But in new age this is not happend easily and my brother rent a home with funds from bank whithout any help of others.
From what has been discussed above, i belive finanitial level of people and role of internet are two critical points for change families from extended family.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...past. I think some basical changes have a important role. Some critical changes l...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nantial level between modern families. The first and the most exquisite reason ...
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Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Today
... that, role of internet and television. today internet is one of the nondepartable as...
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Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...net is one of the nondepartable aspect. in the past, families need someone like au...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...milies need someone like aunt or grandpa for guiding and learning of childran or ...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the countries') or simply say ''some countries''.
Suggestion: some of the countries; some countries
...nantial level of familes. Goverments in some of countries give good funds to familes for affored ...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...s and change familes smaller than past. for example when i was little girl we lived...
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...les smaller than past. for example when i was little girl we lived with my grandp...
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Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ved with my grandparentsand when we were wants to rented a new home, they help us...
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Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ted a new home, they help us finantialy.But in new age this is not happend easily a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 230.0 407.700716846 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02173913043 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67894189535 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595652173913 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.4664950236 48.9658058833 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159740016215 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682874414501 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122206327768 0.0737576698707 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129858462628 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821215080128 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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