Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
No one can deny, there are both positive and negative aspects of the job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. But if I were forced to choose, I would definitely, select a job where I can work only three days a week for long hours. It is my firm belief this selection is more effective for busy living in the cities and for a number of reasons, and I will develop these idea in the subsequent paragraphs.
My primary reason is that when you have a job that you can work just three days a week, you stand in a more patient mood without any hurry through the day. I mean, living in the big cities are all the time with stress and pressure. So, choosing jobs with more complete free time is a suitable way to avoid the stress of our career.
I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, my job is just for three days and I can plan for my free time more flexibly. For example last night I invited to the party of my friend, and the party was on friday. I am free on friday completely. So, I plan for celebrating and spent all my time with my friend without the tiredness of work. As a result, more free time in a week is equal to more enjoyment in a week.
Secondly, if I choose a career with the mentioned circumstances, I can do other pleasure activities all day. Drawing from my own experience, I can cooking at noon and going to the shop. Moreover, at the night I can spend my time with my family in a fresh mood. It is certainly clear to see why I think this method is more fun and comfortable.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that working three days with long hours is better for our life style in the busy and big cities. Not only because we need days for us and our family but also I think in this situation we can plan for our activity in day best.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i mean, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15934065934 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3963037088 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483516483516 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2770574389 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1111111111 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41102758194 0.236089414692 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129357674465 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126284812822 0.0737576698707 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239761003229 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115573519396 0.0645574589148 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.85 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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