Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
No one can deny the important role of parents at training their young children to make them more independent. In this regard, people's opinions are divided as to whether in the past, youth depended much less on their parents to make decisions or not. It is my firm belief that young people are better able to decide about their own lives in the past. For a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
My primary reason is that in last decades people prepared their sons for harsh circumstances, and their young people soon become a worker in their family's fields. In last decades the life was so harder than today and most people had problems in their economical aspects. I believe that situation gave children more self-confidence and consequently, help and able them for performing main decisions in their life by him or herself. Drawing from my kin experience, my grandpa always tells me about his different abilities and says that he was working at his father's farm when he was only 11 age. Moreover, he tells the stories about his independent personality and his rebel decided to prepare for marriage in 17 years old, and most of his decisions were so successful. So, I think that lifestyle was so helpful for training self-sufficient people.
Second, in the past, most of children prefer to depart from their parents and make their own living. This kind of lifestyle was so helpful for them and construct a great condition for ability to make decisions by own. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. After graduate I prepare myself for an independent lifestyle and in that condition my ability for creating various and important choices rises obviously. As a result, people in the last years tested an autonomic life with high argument skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...is regard, peoples opinions are divided as to whether in the past, youth depended much less o...
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Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the children') or simply say ''most children''.
Suggestion: most of the children; most children
...ficient people. Second, in the past, most of children prefer to depart from their parents and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, second, so, as to, i think, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85173501577 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6952176297 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542586750789 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3963904507 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.533333333 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390722027174 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137964175317 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111821033845 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301102478552 0.150856017488 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121201972205 0.0645574589148 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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