Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays life has become complicated than before. In this modern era, people are running behind money and fame to live in their comforts. As far as I am concerned, in this generation, in order to be triumphant, the people have to plan well beyond the process starts, which I will elaborate on hereunder.
To begin with, people need money to live and to meet their expenses. For this, many people are working restlessly to meet their daily wages. For instance, enormous people travel through various means of transportation to reach their destinations on time. For a middle-class person, if they do not calculate the time before leaving home then they might end up going late to their offices. In addition to that, this situation will impact directly on their salaries. Moreover, they will get a little amount of pay which becomes a challenging situation for their family to live. This shows us the importance of planning in order to live happily.
Next, no matter a person is rich or poor in this society, to gain a quality of leadership, he needs to plan for everything to consider. For example, to execute a project a manager needs to organize and plan things well ahead of time so that he can explain and distribute the work for their team. This example clearly illustrates us that to implement leadership skills, organization and planning play a key role.
Furthermore, to prepare for the next day's work, people should plan tonight to avoid chaos in their life. In this situation, we can take the persons who drop their children to school on time. If the parent is late to drop a kid, then the kid is punished for being late at school.
Finally, there are many situations where people benefit without any planning. Students say that unplanned trips are always the best, not following any recipe dish will come out very delicious, unplanned things will ameliorate our happiness level. On the other hand, I believe that planning and organizing ahead outweigh advantages than unplanned or chaotic things.
All in all, by considering all points into account, I vehemently assure that planning well before will not only improve the quality of life, leadership skills but also will benefit families who depend on the income of a single person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91361256545 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61844102125 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583769633508 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7713090963 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.85 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156482733301 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505623374336 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283867860267 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804799396614 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260407607754 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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