Technology has made it easier for people to communicate with each other. Some people prefer to talk over the phone while others prefer to communicate through text messages. What type of communication do you prefer and why?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Make sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
Nowadays, technology is ruling the modern world with its innovations. Some people prefer to connect with the people through texting, as they feel shy to talk over the phone. As far as I'm concerned, I would like to contact a person by making a phone call and the reasons for it can be explored hereunder.
First of all, connecting to people by making a call will eliminate misunderstanding about the conversation we make. Moreover, it creates a fair and clear screen for the people we want to convey. For instance, I work as a dentist. Where I have to make many calls to schedule the patient's appointments. One day I didn't have time to eat, so I thought of making appointments by texting while I eat my lunch. It created chaos between me and my patient as I contacted the wrong person and I didn't realize till the patient showed up in my clinic. All this happened through a text. But, whenever I use calls to make an appointment, I never face such an issue and it will be a peaceful communication. By this example, we can know how important to contact people through calls instead of texting.
Secondly, making calls are reliable as we can identify a person through their voice because from texting we cannot confirm the exact individual we are planning to talk. This can lead to a big misinterpretation among people and also calls are helpful in avoiding fake texts. The following example is from my own personal experience. When I was studying in college, I used to call my friends very frequently to know where they are, so that I can catch up. Later on, when I was in my lecture hall, my friend messaged me to come to the library and I went as I thought there might be an emergency. When I went there, a boy was there instead of my friend and was demanding a price to know where my friend is, because he snatched her phone and texting me as if he is my friend and blackmailed me. I was worried, but after some time the campus squad came and identified my situation as I called them over my phone secretly. This shows us the reliability of calls over text messages.
Finally, communication through text messages has its own advantages like it helps the people with shy, whenever there are no sim cards but we can access to the internet anywhere and can text, some people feel more comfortable through texting and can continue without anyone's knowledge as it is not a call to speak. But, the advantages of text messages will not outweigh the benefits over calls.
All in all, by considering all the points into account, I vehemently assure that communicating through phone calls is always a better option. As it not only eliminates misunderstanding among the people but also it will help us to identify the right person we are talking with.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2262.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57894736842 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75394721777 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487854251012 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 707.4 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2962422415 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.25 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202276729357 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617159856895 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653202390864 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142918941213 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698624636966 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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