Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout history, people have been encountering a myriad of obstacles, and they have behaved differently in order to solve them. One of the most challenging topics on which there is no consensus among people is the necessary factors to be considered in the modern era. Opinions are divided into whether youths should be organized, or having a plan is not a prominent factor today. When it comes to me, it is my firm conviction that, Although life has become tough recently, with an efficient plan, young people would be able to overcome hurdles. There are several reasons to support this, two of which are going to be aptly explored in the following essay.
First and foremost, without a shadow of a doubt, successful people seem to have a vivid plan for every second of their lives. In other words, organized youths can perform more effectively because they allocate their time to various tasks; therefore, it enables them to accomplish their responsibilities appropriately in spite of being overly burdened with multiplicity tasks. To be more specific, my father, who is a well-known businessman, wrote a list of his desires when he was only eleven, and put his heart and soul in it, and climbed the ladder of success, consequently with a proper plan for his life. Once, he mentioned that "if I had not had provisions, I would not become renowned in my carrier in this precarious economic situation.
Another worthwhile reason to be mentioned is that most of the adolescents, as well as youths, have hectic daily schedules. Without suitable programs, for their futures, they would suffer from mental disorders. To talk about this in detail, when people are encumbered with numerous tasks, and they have not been prepared for them, they will go under a great amount of pressure and tension, which takes a drastic toll on their mental and physical health. Take my personal example as a compelling example of this. A couple of years ago, I had not only many exams but also various projects, and because I was immature, I could not handle them. As a result, I got a chronic headache for almost two weeks and lost my self-confidence. Moreover, I lost the opportunity of being a top student, which was an immense asset.
In summary of what has been illustrated and discussed in detail, it is a foregone conclusion that young people should equip themselves with constructive plans. The fact that plans help hasten their prosperities, coupled with preventing them from becoming mentally and physically frail, is the reason which strengthens my claim.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well, while, in summary, as a result, as well as, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2126.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95571095571 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8224636379 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578088578089 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0680904332 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.111111111 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190849133819 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587107617499 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314056865623 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119955948854 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027248694978 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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