Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The world is improving very fast, so people's lifestyle is going to change. And it is essential for people to adapt themselves to this new condition, which can affect the different aspects of their life. I believe that a crucial ability for young people is the ability to plan and organize. I feel this way because of two main reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, having the ability to plan and organize can prevent wasting time. All people have to choose a goal in their life, especially in this sophisticated world, which can be a good motivation to try and improve. Thus, they have to think about their goal and ways that they can attain their goal; in summary, they have to make a plan and organize it. If people do not have a specific goal and plan for their life, it can lead to a waste of their time, while their world is moving forward very fast. Besides, in the new world time plays a vital role, as many successful people say "time is like gold" because successful people are using their time by the accurate plan.
Secondly, the ability to plan and organize can have positive influences on youth's health mental. In this complex life, most people are busy, so they may do not have enough time to spend with each other. Therefore, others have to do something to prevent feel useless. Subsequently, young people prefer to have a plan to be active in their life, which can give a specific mean to their life. If people do not have the ability to plan, they can not make a choice in their life, so they may lose some of their good positions. And it can make them depress and disappointed. But a life based on a plan can help young people to improve with good self-confidence.
To sum everything up, I strongly believe that having the ability to plan and organize can be an essential ability for young people, this is because it can prevent wasting time And help them to give a specific mean to their life, which can be helpful for their health mental.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
The world is improving very fast, so peoples lifestyle is going to change. And it is...
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...orld, which can be a good motivation to try and improve. Thus, they have to think about...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and organize it. If people do not have a specific goal and plan for their life, i...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youths'' or 'youth's'?
Suggestion: youths'; youth's
...rganize can have positive influences on youths health mental. In this complex life, mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, i feel, in summary, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52197802198 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40472354475 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423076923077 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5365291888 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8235294118 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294038898649 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122463670829 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575235255028 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213444487951 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288519580208 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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