do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that in today’s progressive world where we live, human life is so complicated and not predictable. Some psychologists believe that, each individual can perform the best in specified time and use their skills in order to achieve their goals. Therefore, people do not need a plan from the past. I am of the opinion that, having a plan is the critical role to survive in this complex life. The reasons to support my ideas are illustrated in the following reasons.
To begin with, the world surrounding the people life is so changeable based on strange and un predictable events. Thus, each person should gain some abilities to manage and plan the situation immediately. For instance, last year, because of the COVID-19 pandemic most of the companies had been suspended temporary and I faced with this insecurity situation in my career and became unemployed. But, I could handle this condition based on my organization. As a result, I utilized my saving money which I started to do it from the past and I had not been trouble with financial matter during my un employing.
Furthermore, being proper for emergency situation makes the opportunity to cope with challenges and became you as a problem solving. For example, a couple of months ago, we encounter some issues such as lack of devices and budget in our company and should be find a solution as soon as possible based on client complaint. Due to my organization, we could use the old devices which I updated before in order to proper the client service. Consequently, after a week, we received a lot of satisfactions from our company.
In conclusion, having considered the above mentioned into account, I strongly believe that, in current world we struggle with some wired and complicated situation which needs to be plan and organized in order to be survived and succeeded.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'found'?
Suggestion: found
...and budget in our company and should be find a solution as soon as possible based on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92038216561 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87925742711 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566878980892 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5957398294 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178872515363 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602324368914 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441014422782 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102930942929 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432234116849 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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