Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

It goes without saying that in today’s progressive world where we live, each individual have spend most of their time in front of the television. Some sociologists believe that, Movies and Tv’s programs have a harmful effect on the people mentally and physically and avoide them to spent their time in social activities. However, I am of the opinion that Tv’s program is a good platform to teach some essential skills to younge people. The reasons to support my idea are illustrated in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the movies can change mind and lifestyle these days in a suitable way. Actually, most producers try to project the movie based on the modern issues and get a solution ways to people for solving the problems. To be more specific, special movies which related to the couple challenges have a certain plan to teach the relationship skills to young person and informe them how they should become successful counterpart. For instance, one of the movie which shown in Tv per weekend, used the psycologist in the movie as a teacher to advise some practical skills in order to improve in our couple life and it was impreesed.
Furthermore, in contemprory world most of the people should work hard to earn money because of the economical cricis and they have some struggles in life. Under such circumastance, watching the entertainment show on television can release the stress and take us a break for enjoying and having fun.
For example, I used to watch standup comedy show every Fridays. The program made me laugh and made an opportunity to do not focus on my problems for one hour. As a result, watching the TV create special era to forget your failness and challenges for a short time in life.
In conclusion, having considered the above mentioned into account, I strongly believe that, program shows and movies are produced for special aims and the directors would like to invent a space to teach some skills which we did not learn in our education period and help to reach happy life. Consequently, the television have positive influence on our lifestyle.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
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Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a suitable way" with adverb for "suitable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...an change mind and lifestyle these days in a suitable way. Actually, most producers try to projec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88483146067 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7043939591 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567415730337 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0399866755 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.933333333 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184555000094 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621980427621 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364658063453 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904476570398 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376550135922 0.0645574589148 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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