Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that in today’s progressive world where we live, all the people need to communicate with each othere to relieve their stress and experience new things. In this regard, each individual make a decision in various stages of life and they have affect by other opinion of people who can desire the best choice. It has a debate among psychologist that who are more experienced in our life can influence in our decision. I hold the view that consulting with friends have effect on directly more than teacher. The reasons to support my idea are illustrated in following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is no secret to anyone that each individual spend their much time with friends and people are susceptible by advising the friends instead of teachers. Hopefully, people can choose their friends by their own and they make friend with who have in common more. Therfore, they acquire with each othere’s favourite and understand by friends. For example, when I had struggled between persuing Master degree and getting job, my friend talked with me and convinced me to start a business.
As a result, both of us had a common goal and she could influence me to make a best decision in that time.
Furthermore, friends would not judge each othere at all. People can reveal a most of the secrets in friendship realation without considering fear and embaressing feelings and still support by them in the crucial situation. For example, five years ago when I had admitted to a reputable University in the far away city from my home, I was not capable to pay the expensive tuition. Hence, I chosed to aboundan my bachelor degree but my best friend borrowed some money and encouraged me to persue my degree. Consequently, if he did not realize my conditions and affect, I would never graduate as a qualify engineer.
In conclusion, having considered the above-mentioned reasons into account, I believe that people influenced by friends in their livehood. People can get advice from their friend better than their teachers due to their instinctive and cognitive reasons to help you choose the best way.
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...goal and she could influence me to make a best decision in that time. Furthermor...
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...affect, I would have never graduated as a qualify engineer. In conclusion, having consid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91643454039 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73076272212 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559888579387 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1677148261 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.823529412 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251757689603 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867623831614 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084822651064 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146001168053 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103148517357 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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