Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today’s society many distractions and responsibilities to have a fruitful day and fulfill the responsibilities delegated to each person there is a need to plan before any engagements. I will explain my reasonings for this statement in the following essay.
First, everyone needs to consider their health and plan for their day considering the importance of physical and mental health. In the modern world there are many distractions. This includes but is not limited to movies, games, social media applications and many such programs. We should not forget about ourselves when absorbed into these sources of entertainment. For example, I always had a tendency to forget my surroundings after starting to watch movies going as far as forgetting my meals. Hence, my body started weakening and I got sick. Simultaneously, I would neglect my relationship with friends and family this led me to be isolated and feel lonely, and I started getting depressed a lot easier. Nevertheless, after organizing and planning my actions for each day, delegating a particular amount of time to watch movies. Accordingly, I stopped neglecting myself and my relationship with my family and friends improved.
Second, due to heavy responsibilities and workloads, the assignments and tasks for work and study may be forgotten and overlooked due to inadequate planning. However, by organizing our assignments we keep track of our tasks and finish them on time. For example, there was a period of my third year in university that I had courses including Graphic design and Compiler design each requiring the completion of multiple projects. Considering I hadn't made a plan I forgot to finish my Compiler design project. Thankfully our professor gave us extra time to finish the project. Regardless, if I had a plan for my studies, I wouldn't have had such issues.
Based on the above reasonings I believe that it is essential for all people to have the ability to organize and plan for their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, so, third, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12654320988 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14350147271 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570987654321 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8638666792 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2777777778 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150429368296 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051055434255 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666798287793 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132780790423 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874786716524 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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