Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

The life has become more and more complex in 21st century, so it is imperative for young people to plan and organize to keep pace with the developing of the world.

To begin with, young people have many courses to study and graduation studies to complete, as well as the need to find work and fall in love, all of which take time. Only by planning wisely will we not waste too much time on something. And, by dividing things into stages, we can track our progress and improve the motivation and efficiency of our studies and work. For example, I made a plan for each chapter of my study, and finally I succeeded in entry Nagoya University.

Second, effort is necessary for academic and professional success, and the direction of effort is even more critical. If we don't plan ahead of time while studying and researching, we might end up going in the wrong direction. For instance, in order to write an essay that is appropriate for the topic, we need to create an outline first and consider a good paragraph structure.

Third, teamwork is essential today. It is crucial that we make sure team members understand our thoughts, ideas, and outcomes. Without careful planning and organization, it is impossible to express our contents well.

In conclusion, effective planning and organization can help us save time, increase our productivity, point the way forward, and enable better communication with others in today's modern, dynamic, complex society.

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Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, third, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 246.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9512195122 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74109160456 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654471544715 0.524837075471 125% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.828484592 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171902106311 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577630895457 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054534099653 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100168844114 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580248355188 0.0645574589148 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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