Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, young people need to have the ability to plan and organize.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, young people need to have the ability to plan and organize.

  Organization and planning for the future always considered as the fundamental element of success, this necessity is recognized from a long time ago even beyond the modern era. Over time, this importance is bolded too. In my perspective, nowadays lifestyle obliges the existence of the ability in planning and programming. In what follows, I will list three conspicuous reasons to give adherence to my standpoint.
    The first striking reason which should be considered is the increment of duties in modern life. In another word, meanwhile, in the past, the responsibilities of human beings were plain and considered on few factors; in the current society, on the contrary, each individual gets a prolonged list of responsibilities. This fact is also verified by the noteworthy, recently conducted study in the Sociology Department of the Tehran University in Iran. According to this intelligent study, the number of duties of the modern adult in a well-developed society is approximate forty-five percent higher than his previous generation. With the consideration of this increased duties and fixed period existed in each day, the ability of planning is required for covering and handling the entire tasks simultaneously. Otherwise, the person would not be able to catch up the hectic modern lifestyle and faces the failure is his occupations.
     Another equally crucial reason which should be highlighted is the stuff currently get highly detailed. Indeed, tasks contain abounded and precise details which demand full concentration to occupy and work properly. In this scenario, is it possible to do this type of subtle task in the hurry and cursory? A lucid example which shed the spotlight on the issue is the difference of the dentistry field in the scope of its precision between the now and fifty years ago. While in fifty years ago the teeth were categorized in two groups of healthy and unhealthy ones and the absolute treatment for unhealthy teeth were pulling them out; nowadays, on the other hand, the treatment process is altered completely. In current time to whole attempts of dentists are curing teeth and preventing from pulling them out. These attempts are achieved by the various techniques such as the filling or canal treatment. This precision is applicable for entire occupations and required complete focus and concentration. In addition, it is obvious that the full focus is possible while the person thought is not busy with other tasks. At this stage, the importance of ability for planning and scheduling gets bolded as it provides the full-concentrated mind.
    However, some people may believe that since mankind is unaware of future events, the organization of program based on unpredictable events is impossible. Although this perspective could be considered as the sound one in the first glance, it is lacking in some important factor which is the flexibility of the plan. In fact, persuading the exact program is impossible and each well-organized schedule requires flexibility to match with the unpredicted events.
  To wrap it up, according to the all aforementioned reasons, it is obviously illustrated that modern life asks for the capability of organization and planning. Since the individual’s duties are increased, tasks in modern life are more detailed, and the program possesses the flexibility to align with not-assumed conditions.
 

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, well, while, in addition, in fact, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2881.0 1977.66487455 146% => OK
No of words: 535.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38504672897 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80937282943 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20519274721 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538317757009 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 900.0 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 4.94265232975 344% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1636230398 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.24 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10698004906 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296338721485 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316797804291 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670183052608 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257730565275 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 165.0 86.8835125448 190% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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