Nowaday, our world is changing dramatically, and people in different place have different feeling about this alternation.
Personally, I believe that the variation of the world is alternate with the decreasing of happiness in people life. I feel this way
for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the changing of the world make people forget the real value in their life. People in this variated society have
always follow other people value, and they do not concentrate on their own meaning in life. My personal experience in an
expelling example of this. Long time ago, I have always compare myself with friends who had many things that I thought that I
did not have. I have looked at their life and ask myself why they have such a beautify life, but my life is so terible. Moreover, I
used to care about other feeling to much, and worried about what other people think about me. This time is a terrible time in my
life that I can not forget. After all, I realized that this society is changing to much, but I have my own life that other people are
just a part of it. I have to control my feeling and forget how beautify life the other people have and stop care about what they
think about me. As a result, I overcome that time and now I have my own greatfull life that I allway dream about.
Secondly, the changing in this society make people life much more stressfull and take all the free time that they can use for
their personal life. The society today need people work more than before, and they have to spend almost the time of the day
before the computer screen to finish their tasks at the end of the day. Next, they go to home in the stressfull feeling, have a
simple and fast dinner before go to bed. They don't have time to have even a short conversation with their friends and family, so
the relationship between them are not strong as before. Additionally, people don't have time to think about themself, think about
the favourite things they love when they were young. Instead, I go to work for money to pay for their living things. What they
care for now is the work in the office, how many money they get, is that enough to pay the rent, their food, and their children's
school fees. They also have to care about their boss's feelings, and always have to ask is he angree about them.
In conclusion, this changing world is make people life is so
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'followed'.
Suggestion: followed
...e in this variated society have always follow other people value, and they do not con...
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Line 6, column 57, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'compared'.
Suggestion: compared
...e of this. Long time ago, I have always compare myself with friends who had many things...
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Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... life and ask myself why they have such a beautify life, but my life is so terible. Moreov...
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Line 8, column 34, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...er, I used to care about other feeling to much, and worried about what other peop...
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Line 9, column 81, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... realized that this society is changing to much, but I have my own life that other...
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Line 15, column 47, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... and fast dinner before go to bed. They dont have time to have even a short conversa...
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Line 16, column 78, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... strong as before. Additionally, people dont have time to think about themself, thin...
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Line 18, column 45, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
... for now is the work in the office, how many money they get, is that enough to pay t...
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Line 18, column 45, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun money seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much money', 'a good deal of money'.
Suggestion: much money; a good deal of money
... for now is the work in the office, how many money they get, is that enough to pay the ren...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, after all, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49661399549 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23416322298 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424379232506 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1835409013 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5454545455 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1363636364 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13636363636 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.53405017921 441% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164392093309 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696245050039 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595914603322 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731460304937 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542711502115 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.