Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I completely disagree with the following statement. In my opinion, boys and girls should attend merged schools. First of all, they will need to conduct families in the future, and separate schools can cause a lot of problems in perspective. Secondly, both girls and boys should be taught how to act and deal with problems together, using cooperation successfully.
First and foremost, simultaneous improvement and growth is extremely important for boys and girls. When they will get older, they will need to act together while working. And because of dividing policies of their schools, adults can feel uncomfortable while being with each other. In many movies rich kids were forced to study in separated schools. After graduation, they didn't know how to choose a good partner and were slightly afraid of men. Because of it, their parents made a choice for them and in most cases their marriage lives were unhappy.
Secondly, both girls and boys should feel equality among them. While studying in the same school, they have one program and equal conditions. It matters mostly because even nowadays in some countries women are treated worse than men and have less rights. For instance, in Pakistan husband can even spill toxic substance on his wife's face for being unfaithful to him or for refusing to be married with him. This should definitely be stopped, and the process should begin in schools, where children will be taught appropriate values and ways of conducting family life.
Overall, to my mind children should study in united schools, which will provide them with equal conditions for obtaining knowledge, and will teach them the same information, using specific activities that involve cooperation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: didn't
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun rights is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, first of all, in most cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 278.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18345323741 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58212503597 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611510791367 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7931483654 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0625 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181248796834 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702992805362 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778518737055 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12776367184 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104166689447 0.0645574589148 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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