Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As per one proverb "To give a vote is fundamental right of every citizen" because the votes defines the leader of nation. The democracy in any nation lead by people of that country. Democracy is a government of people, by the people, for the people.
Hence, I believe that we should be allowed children over the age of 15 to vote.
First, the chief reason behind why I agree with the statement is that the maturity of people . To give the vote to one party people have to understand the pros and cons of every contestants who are competing for leader of nation. I believe that the children behave maturely after the age of 15. Some time they can take some important decision of their life which make them more successful. For example, I seen many children who left their house in early age of their life and they build emperor of giant company through stringent struggle.
Secondly, The growth of country is define by the important decision which is taken by their country's government. The government play vital role to enhance the performance of country. Hence, we need to take extra care while giving to the vote. Some time I had seen that due to some vote, which was given to wrong party, the country suffers many problem. So, I believe that If we permit the young children to giving vote, we can negate this worse situation of country.
However, the children can influence easily with any people, who try to gain their trust. A person, who stand up as the contestant of leader and his intention towards nation is not appropriate then they try to intimidate or provoke children for their advantage. So, its leads as the negative impact for country.
To sum up, it can be said that to improve the nations growth we need to elect efficient, wise, innovative, kind leader and for that we should allow the children over the age of 15 to vote. On the other hand we should not negate the negative side because it may happens that some wrong minded people will take the advantages of Innocent of children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: saw
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Suggestion: defined
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... up, it can be said that to improve the nations growth we need to elect efficient, wise...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65363128492 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43168946362 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497206703911 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2207206697 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6842105263 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8421052632 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187379051361 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653381342266 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890951717101 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131557361055 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112848839171 0.0645574589148 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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