Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
Considering the necessity of learning a foreign language for children as soon as they start school, I am strongly inclined to take the side of this statement. Being one of the most proliferated known educational topic, learning a foreign language plays a critical role to the future profession of all the children. To elaborate more on the subject mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, learning a foreign language is tightly related to the physiological characteristics of children. Needless to say, the process of learning a foreign language has a direct proportion to the listening and the speaking capabilities of a learner. As the strengthening of this characteristics is formed in the earlier ages, it is more advisable that teaching and learning a foreign languages initiates simultaneously.
Another primary reason of my opinion can be attributed to the merit of introduction with the new culture in conjunction with the learning a foreign language. It goes without saying, when a teacher teaches some matters from a foreign language, some core subjects about the foreign culture are transmitted. Thus, an opportunity for children to introduce with another culture will be provided in their elementary school.
Aside from the point I made above, as the current educational findings reveal, the ability of a child to learn some new communication methods particularly the learning a foreign language is more suitable as they begin school. For example, considering the high level of the emotional characteristics and the curiosity in earlier ages, children are persuaded to imitate some jobs that just learned. Therefore, when children learn a foreign language they applied it to speak with their peers as an unusual communication method. This can be contributed as a good opportunity for intrinsic practicing of a foreign language.
To recapitulate, I cannot agree more about the learning a foreign language for children as soon as they start school regarding the importance of appropriate physiological characteristics in earlier ages and the necessity to introduce with another culture. To my best knowledge, although the improvement of the native language cannot be neglected, the substantial role of a foreign language in the future profession of children can play a complementary role.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43715846995 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.271563296 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464480874317 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9802986196 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.666666667 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325558962152 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123740626868 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708966176016 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202912029491 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537002395138 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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