Some people say that children should spend most of the time playing and studying while other people say that they should be required to help the family with household chores, like cooking and cleaning. In my opinion, they have to help the family. We can learn about how to help others through house work and how to do household chores that is needed for future by helping our family.
To begin with, we are society. Thus, we need to help each other. If we want it, we have to help others. However, we don’t know how to aid others and we must know how to assist other people. For example, If your young sister needs your help but you are not around, she will have a hard time. So we have to know how to help others. We can know how to help others through helping the family with household chores when we are young.
In addition, children become an adult after time. Children have to learn how to do household chores for future, when we are adult. We should not ask parents to do housework. If you become an adult and live apart from your parents, you should do your housework. So learning about housework when we are young is very good thing.
Therefore, children need to help the family with household chores for their family, neighbors, and oneself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...egin with, we are society. Thus, we need to help each other. If we want it, we h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, for example, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 1977.66487455 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 230.0 407.700716846 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50869565217 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14159013763 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 212.727598566 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482608695652 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 618.680645161 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2477047427 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.8125 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.375 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252368390356 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965225228304 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847458440965 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190211772536 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824414451065 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 86.8835125448 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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