Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Every child should be raised in a home with two parents Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Every child should be raised in a home with two parents.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Parents have a crucial role in children upbringing. Some people believe that single-parents able to child rearing. In my opinion, every child should be rearing in a home with two parents. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.

To begin with, parents have a major role in child personality development. Parents teach children society cultural norms. Infants learn about speaking, walking, and other activities from their parents. Parents teach them what is good and bad. They also learn self- sufficiency and self- confident from their parents. Child learns how to become a noble person from his parents. Mother can teach the child good manners, rites and discipline. Child learns moral values and cultural knowledge from the parents. For example, my father teaches to me how to play chess. Also, I learn driving a bicycle and a car from my father. When I was a child, my mother told me stories about life moral and values. It is certainly clear to see why I feel that child personality development in a crucial role of parents.

In addition, child behavior develops according to parent’s upbringing. Single-parents able to rearing child, but sometimes a child feel lonely and he/she develop anti-social personality. Some parents more important to their work rather than their child. So, child feels neglect. Child behavior related how to parents traits them. For example, child participates in school activities, he/she needs parents support. Both parents support and encourage to child’s talent. Parents can motivate to child, whenever child feels despondent. Even so child grow young, he/she requires support of parents. They can share their dilemma to parents. Because they believe that parents support and solve their dilemma.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that every child should be raised at home with two parents. This is because child behavior and personality development in major responsibility of both parents.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 578, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
... to me how to play chess. Also, I learn driving a bicycle and a car from my father. Whe...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'develops'.
Suggestion: develops
...ometimes a child feel lonely and he/she develop anti-social personality. Some parents m...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, even so, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32380952381 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72234763004 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507936507937 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.1344086022 50% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.6235680575 48.9658058833 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.8275862069 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.8620689655 20.6045352989 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.62068965517 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233490714798 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761314546315 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885540621878 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189601818473 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751229624556 0.0645574589148 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.39 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.0537634409 60% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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