Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The food your parents ate growing up is healthier than the food eaten now. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Health is extremely crucial in every individual's life. Being healthy depends on many factors, among which is healthy food to keep humans free from various diseases. Food that we consume in the present days and food that our parents ate in earlier days have a huge difference. As far as I am concerned I agree with the notion that our parents ate healthier food than us. This position is based on three main reasons that will be analyzed in the following passages.
To begin with, most of the foods that our parents consumed are organic and not chemically treated.
Due to advances in food marketing, huge competition exists among those food companies, therefore, it is very common to find chemically injected vegetables and fruits in supermarkets those days. Since these are much cheaper and easily accessible. On the other hand, most vegetables and fruits in the past days during our parents were all organic and pure which are much healthier and also cost-effective, unlike present days. For instance, when my parents visited for the first time in New York, they were shocked by the size of apples, and also because of its radiant bright waxy red color. Soon we bought those apples home and to my shock, my parents could feel the weird bitter taste in those apples soon I explained the reasons may be because of chemicals.
Secondly, canned and processed foods are available everywhere and those are even cheaper than normal raw ingredients. despite its unhealthiness, people these days prefer to eat those as they are easy and take lesser time to prepare. Such harmful canned and processed foods are not mundane in older days.
Furthermore, during the older days, fast food restaurants and vendors were not so common as it is now. Present days, fast food stalls are found at every corner of the street and most of today's generations are more tempted to eat fast food rather than cooking meals at home. My life is a compelling example of this. I rarely cook food at home. I eat burgers or pizzas for lunch every day at my workplace. I have noticed certain weight gain ever since I have started eating from outside. This example demonstrates how unhealthy food is readily available at our doorsteps and due to this, our health is deteriorating at a greater frequency. Consequently, foods that or parents ate were much healthier.
In summation, I am of the opinion that our parents ate healthier food because of more availability of organic and pure foods, lesser canned and processed foods in market and also because of lesser fast-food restaurants and vendors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the todays') or simply say ''most todays''.
Suggestion: most of the todays; most todays
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, as for, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93592677346 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60374092883 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50114416476 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9650881913 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7826086957 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91304347826 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233891477649 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765889257697 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703876834044 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139002083918 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530821724621 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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