Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Art and culture are the most important pillars of each society in today’s world. People and nations are recognized throward these paths. In each society, Artists and Musicians are the symbols of that culture. A controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether should government spend more money on supporting the Arts or whether it should spend more money on Sports. Some people possess the conviction that the former is agreeable but others hold exactly the opposite and allege that spending more attention and money on Sports is more fruitful. I am personally content that this issue is multifaceted. Due to the fact that there are some developments in Sports and physical activity in recent years, every nation and country has an international rank and mastered certain areas. I’ll continue with investment in Art. To substantiate my point of view., the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind elucidated my standpoint is investments in Art fields and artistic vision bring more attention to our society and increase our rank in the world. We can show and expand our culture to the world. There are many countries and nations that we are not familiar with them and vase vera. We can offer our etiquette and mannerisms by supplying our art to the world.
The second reason rationale behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that supporting Art brings us economic opportunities. Besides the fact that it improves other countries' willingness to corporate and investment, the rate of jobless and unemployed people will be decreased. There are many graduated students that want to attain to market by government supporting art it paved their root. Consider my personal experience to make this point more clear. One of my friends is a specialist artist and she has various skills like painting, drawing, cooking, and songwriting. She was unemployed when she was a student. One day she joined the painting draw from the local environment and she won the first prize. After that, she joints to local Islamic committee and made income this way. Thus last month she ran her own exhibition.
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...mic committee and made income this way. Thus last month she ran her own exhibition. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, regarding, second, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07479224377 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71743034546 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567867036011 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5811833424 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2727272727 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4090909091 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 5.45110844103 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168132571887 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414055401925 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655554531932 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104534113641 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569966372409 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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