There is no shortage opinion on the significance of having children in our life. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely disagree with this statement because children are important in each time and place. It is my firm belief children are the thing that we live for because they took our names for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, having kids is the most important thing in life because they provide happiness and making us feel the meaning of life. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal expeience. Everyone was a kid and pass with each level in the life to be an adult. When my father was a kid, he helped my grandfather on many works in his life especially, when he was an old man, because of that in these days I am trying to help my father in any way that I can because everyone in a certain time needs some help like taking him to hospital, helping him in house chores, and financial aid, so having kids is crucial in each time not just in past.
Secondly, marring and having kids is a way for each one in the world because no one can live alone for whole life. Drawing from my own personal experience. Three years ago, I married then I got a baby, so I felt so happy and responsible for a human. Responsible in how to provide food, drink, clothes, place to live, and giving him high level of eduation to be a pretty man in the future. now days, I feel so excited when I see my baby playing around me and I am watching him raising in front of my eyes. Consequently, I am providing so much effort everyday to obtain anything to my kid. If I had more money, I would have to raised more kids because this is my passion.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that kids are important for complete life as our previous fathers. This is because children are investment in the future, and give parents awesome feelings when then raise their youngs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, second, secondly, so, then, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35135135135 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4650900798 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518918918919 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0389183501 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.625 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0778220211588 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331626041271 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294167287675 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547125082003 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276856117239 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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