Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Human activity is making the earth a worse place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people think that human being is razing the entire planet Earth causing pandemics to happen by leaps and bounds and spreading horror to it. However, others believe otherwise. They state that it is not humans fault the earth being deteriorating. In my opinion, the earth is becoming a worse place to live due to the people and I feel this way because of the ushering reasons to be explored in this article.
First of all, each following day many new babies are being born and this causes a disbalance to the environment. For example, that event brings the desideratum of damaging the ecosystem because the environment will be depleted and later on it will run out of natural resources. Therefore, this example clarifies how we are eradicating our planet.
Moreover, new types of pandemics are coming and destroying the human being oneself. For instance, we can see currently what it is happening with the man suffering with COVID-19 as it happened some decades ago with other viruses causing many deaths and bringing the chaos to the humankind. Thus, this instance elucidates the horror happening to the humankind and how the earth is becoming uninhabitable.
Finally, I strongly support that the earth is rampant because new kinds of viruses are coming and the human being is destroying his own homeland.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1977.66487455 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 220.0 407.700716846 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87272727273 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56439382749 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559090909091 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 220.0 20.1344086022 1093% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1072.0 100.406767564 1068% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 220.0 20.6045352989 1068% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 122.0 5.45110844103 2238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 11.8709677419 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148509375264 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148509375264 0.076458572812 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897475433587 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346239447239 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 111.5 11.7677419355 948% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -151.82 58.1214874552 -261% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 89.1 10.1575268817 877% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.45 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.35 8.01818996416 229% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 10.002688172 540% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 90.0 10.0537634409 895% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 90.0 10.247311828 878% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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