Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
One of the biggest problems of contemporary life is to find a suitable job opportunity. Actually, this is a result of the high acquisition of learning professional skills and getting experience. In this way, I believe that provided an opportunity to get a safe job, one should not hesitate to get it until further chances. In the following essay, I discuss my main reasons for this idea.
First of all, due to the necessity of high levels of education needed by companies and agencies, there is an intense competition between the potential employees to be chosen for the job. Hence, if people have already found a career which can bring them an unavoidable amount of salary, experiences, and benefits, they should not hesitate to take the advantages until they get a better chance of working in a more satisfying environment.
Secondly, it is abundantly clear that people need to have something intriguing and astonishing in their curriculum vitae to be employed by their dream company and start their dream job. Therefore, it is essential to take almost all the opportunities and great situations to improve one's resume and gather some hard-achieving experiences to become a potential employee for a great company. To illustrate, I want to become a mathematics professor at Stanford University which is among the top universities in this field. Definitely, to unlock this achievement, I have to get my degrees from top academics over the globe and work as a lecturer, teacher, and tutor in other great places to gain some experiences and perform something special to my dream university. Hence, I would get all the chances to make progress and be capable of performing amazing skills.
Finally, yet importantly, it is not easy to tell what is going to happen in the near future and it is not rational to risk your life at all. Unquestionably, all the great minds throughout history have done something they didn't love at all for the promise of more abundant life. So, if someone has the chance to get a job with normal merits, they should not hesitate to do so. This way, they can invest a great amount of money and even start their own dream job after a few years of hard-working.
To sum it up, I believe that we cannot guess what is waiting for us even on the next day. Therefore, if one can get a job that supports their needs they should do it for sure because this not only guarantees their lives, but also brings them experiences, benefits, and even an amazing social status.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 222, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ughout history have done something they didnt love at all for the promise of more abu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80465116279 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86549000885 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525581395349 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.039966605 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.529411765 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2941176471 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27389466272 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840121995736 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559822090113 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157331229747 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282708146358 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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