Do you agree or disagree with the following statement If people have the opportunity to get a secure job they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some people argue that people should be await for long time to engage in the most satisfying profession rather than grabbing the secure job opportunities right away. They cite that great works takes long period, if one adhesive to job that so called as secure might be not satisfying in long run. However, I strongly disagree with these people and I believe that grasping the secure job right way better for following two reasons.

To commence, it is fortuitous to grasp the life-securing job in right time is best because people who can recognize the right platform and consume them immediately led to be more succeed in their life. For instance, the rock star Rihannna, who used to live in small island Barbados could not be billionaire today, if she didn't grasp the opportunity when famous music composer and director, Evan Rogers offer her as a leading singer in his new album. It is important to the succeed by knowing the right platform because succeed people are can change the world and could be the role model for rest of the people. Thus, recognizing the opportunities at right time helps to successful in the life.

Furthermore, one should be take as opportunity when they get a life reliance job urgently because times and tides wait for no one. In other words, same opportunities does not come frequently. If we don't catch the right train in right time, then we might be guilt for rest of the life. To illustrate my own experience, four years ago I got a huge paying job, triple than my current salary, but I rejected that and waiting for some thing else. Unfortunately, I felt to guilt that I miss such golden chance which distortion my inner peace. If I had choose that fortunate opportunities, then I would live lavish and fancy life. It is crucial catch the right train at right because it is main gate for one to be more satisfaction and euphoric in the life. Therefore, people should do the job that seems secure for rest of the life.

To sum up, whether people should take as a fortune moment if they high paid job or life secure profession is complex. Some suggested that for more satisfying in life people should wait for some else that can change their life. Nevertheless, I still contend that people should engage in the job that across in their life as opportunity because times and tides waits for no one and life securing job which taken at right time helps to people succeed in their life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'awaited'?
Suggestion: awaited
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Suggestion: didn't
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...er in his new album. It is important to the succeed by knowing the right platform because s...
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Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taken'?
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: something
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Suggestion: chosen
...ich distortion my inner peace. If I had choose that fortunate opportunities, then I wo...
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Suggestion: chosen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in other words, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.662004662 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52727311427 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480186480186 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6174496765 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.111111111 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363645067245 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131645358336 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832752518893 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253135175529 0.150856017488 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790750137082 0.0645574589148 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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