Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for universities professors. Use spesific reasons and examples to support your answer
In this progresive and sophisticated world, Universities and the Thrive of science are the critical factors that indicate a persones sucsess. Among this the important effect of professors on the education and sciences is very clear. When it comes to this point, People have some debates as to whether universities should increse the salary of the professors or not. Personally, I agree with the first group and in what followes, two reasons will be discussed to shed light on this idea.
The first reason coming to my mind to substantiate my stand point is that incresing the professors income can acclaim them to work very efficiently and can get them ride of the hustle and bustle of making money. If they can earn more money, they will work with more enthusiasem and with more satisfaction. My personal experience is the compelling example of this. Three years ago, whan i have stdied Veterinary Medidicine in the Shiraz University, we had a professor who spoke all of the time about his low incom and all of the time he was worry to made his familys ends meet. Therefore, they did not put enough effort to teach very well and to publish.
Another equally noteworthy point corroborating my stance is that if the university pay more salary, it will ba able to attract professors with higher scientific potential. Additionally,this increasing can tempt inteligent and famous scientist to loin to the university and this event have a seriouse affect on the educational and research scope which can increase the level of the university. For instance, the University of Indiana is supported by the government and the salary of the professors are not high.In contrast, the University of Stanford is a Private university and the university income is very high; therefore they Stanfords frofessors incom is remarkable. Therefore Stanford has better professors and the rank of this university is higher.
TO sum up, based on all argumentation stated above, it is bettr for universities to pay more money to their professor because of the impavt of this issue on the quality of professors work and the this issue have a main in inteligent professors mind to join to the university
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...ue have a main in inteligent professors mind to join to the university
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, in contrast, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97260273973 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92369205456 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531506849315 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1873426608 48.9658058833 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.642857143 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0714285714 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202398213061 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711309249407 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564394141445 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128204138257 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364697249756 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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