Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Education is a crutial part of our lives. It is thought by some people that to improve education universities should focus on finding other ways rather than to increase professors wages. This essay will discuss why, in fact, it is essential that universities should spend more money on professor'salaries.
Contrary to the belief that professors should not be paid more than a certain amount of money monthly, evidence shows that professors who had a wage above the normal rate, they had a great performance on teaching their students. Professors who do not have to worry about their incomes, they have less stress and are entirely focused on their job. For example, statistics have revealed that 89 percent of professors who had a discent salary had a great motivation on their job. Students who were tought by these professors had a high level of performance in academic subjects. Because of this, It is clear that teachers that earne a considerable amount of money, would be more pasionated to their job.
Furthermore, it is important to consider the fact that professors would save more time because they do not have to work extra hours doing different kinds of jobs in order to earn enough money to support their families or fulfill their financial needs. If professors have good salarys, they do not have to work somwhere else, but instead they would improve their lectures and be more creative on their jobs. Therefore, students would benefit a lot by listening their creative and meanigful lectures. My experience is an compelling example of this.when I was a child , my father was a teacher, our familie's finances depended on his salary. But his wage could not cover our expenses. He had to work other jobs to support us. By the time he came home, he was very tired, and coulden't think about his lecture that he hasd to held the next day. Even though, he was a talented teacher, he had to deal with this condition, which it was not good for both his performance and for students as well. That is why, I strongly believe that the universities should invest more in increasing professor's wages.
All in all, this essay discussed how a good salary would influence on professors lives and how students could benefit from creative lectures of more motivated teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83933518006 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69246903752 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512465373961 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3397183681 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.764705882 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70588235294 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199244065821 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693404943538 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594459799057 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160688926703 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618328941889 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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