If I could make a choice before enter into university on which courses I should learn during the undergraduate study period, I would prefer several subjects to study.
Nowadays, the environment is developed rapidly. We are living in an unparalleled period of the information explosion. In practically, integrated skills are required for maintaining our life and enforce ourselves to merge into the society. The world no long be connected by spots but by nets. Living in such net social, only one subject is not enough. For example, a specialized accountant should master accounting, finance, tax law, economic law, corporate strategy and so on. Only when these knowledges act together could help an accountant fulfills his/her desire of job.
The competition is becoming more and more severe these days. Only one subject cannot outstand ourselves in the army of employee. When we go to an interview, the one owns more diplomas are superior to that only owns one.
If we take subjects as tools, every tool gets its own advantages and disadvantages. For instance, mathematics are so logical and boring, and literatures are so unrealistic and emotional. But they mutually complement with each other. When we learn both mathematics and literatures together, we could balance our ways of thoughts by logical and sensitive mind. This balance will help us to keep moving stable forward.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'these knowledges'?
Suggestion: this knowledge; these knowledges
...corporate strategy and so on. Only when these knowledge act together could help an accountant f...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...the one owns more diplomas are superior than that only owns one. If we take subj...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 223.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24215246637 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90107843881 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663677130045 0.524837075471 126% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 618.680645161 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8523909791 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0625 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9375 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.095206394119 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299326813267 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376720833586 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566120642925 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220565403054 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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