Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place toanother.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Although moving from one place to another has certain appeals, I still believe that it is better to live in one town or city all my life.There are several considerations regarding this issue.
First, living in one town has economic advantage. I do not have to repeatedly buy and sell houses, which is both time-consuming and costly. Plus, relocating is also expensive, not to mention the effort to remodel the house again and again, whichcan also cost a small fortune. For example, when I was in elementary school, my father had a job offer that required him torelocate. Moving was a nightmare. To streamline the process, my parents decided not to take any furniture, so we had to sellthem cheaply. Once we arrived at our new place, my parents spent a lot of money on furnishing the house and hiring an interiordesigner to make it fell like home again. I do not want to relive that experience in the future.
Second, living in one town has pragmatic advantage. Since l will be living in the same town all my life, I will be familiar with thecommunity. I know where the best markets are located, where l can get the best quality of grocery and price. I know myneighbors well. We can look after one another in case of emergency. I probably will be working for the same employer, whichgives me a better chance of promotion and thus better compensation. Of course, these will be future prospects. I cannot providerelevant examples here.
Finally, living in one town has sentimental advantage. I like the feeling of belonging to a place. Moving from one place toanother would make me feel like a plant without roots. Again, my childhood experience is a good example. We moved betweendifferent apartments. It took me a while to make a few friends in the neighborhood and then we moved. I had to go through thatprocess over and over. Truthfully, I did not like that, and so, l do not want to let that happen in the future.
Because living in one town or city has multiple advantages. I believe it is better than moving from place to place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, regarding, second, so, still, then, thus, well, while, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65833333333 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92181952232 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.874528864 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.1111111111 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03703703704 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281229398238 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745870897479 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865989819155 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199651227028 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101907092813 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.