Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to pursue a career that is similar to one of your parents’ careers than to pursue a career that is different from your parents’ careers.
It is crucial that kids have to search their careers after they graduate in university. Some people may state that pursuing a career which is similar to one of your parents is an efficient way to succeed while others argue that having different careers can help their kids develop completely. In my opinion, I suggest that pursuing a career is different from my parents is a better way to find the life target.
First of all, if kids have totally different interests with their parents, it is hard to find a similar career. For example, my mom’s interest is mathematic, and she is good at counting. In contrast, I always failed in my math lessons. It is impossible that I will be a counter like her because we have totally different interests.
Second, even children and parents choose different careers, they still have the chance to be a successful person. To illustrate, my neighbor Amy who is a famous piano player and her parents are both doctors. But Amy’s family respect her choice and now she is a successful musician.
Third, having similar career will make me feel pressure because everyone try to compare me with my parents. To be specific, when I studied in university, one of the professors was my teacher’s good friend. He always cares about my scores and projects which make me so tired. This kind of things make me feel pressure and I do not to meet the professor anymore.
Definitely, some people may state that having similar career will bring lots of advantages. For instance, we can get skills and experience from our parents. However, we should not rely on out parents to help us because we have to develop our own lives and careers. To conclude, I think it is unnecessary that have to pursue a similar career with our parents. They still can give us useful suggestions and share working experience together even if we have different careers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, third, while, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83435582822 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67163826553 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521472392638 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.897202448 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9473684211 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1578947368 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306484025627 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908241160628 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828198686298 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166044161615 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948776392447 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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