Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can solve the most important problems in their lives by themselves or with the help from their family; help from the government is unnecessary?
Nowadays, people have lots of tools to help them to solve the problems. Some people may state that we can solve the most important problems in our lives by ourselves or with help from our family which others argue that having help from the government is more efficient.
First of all, some problems cannot be solved by ourselves. To be specific, our government force people to be educated until senior high school. Without the policy, it is hard to let every place to have the same resources and teachers. Furthermore, education is not only important for the kids but also helping the people who live in the countryside. It is too difficult to construct a complete education system by a person without the government’s help/ involvement.
Second, the government has the entire law and organization to assure us of safety and protection. For example, police officers provide a safe environment for people, they manage the traffic system and arrest criminals to protect people. Actually, in my country, the police officer will get the request to catch the wild animal or save people who are lost in the forest, even some of them help foreign visitors to find their way to go. As a result, a safe environment is hard to build one family and one person. We need our government to construct it.
Third, professional workers can solve our problems as soon as possible. For instance, if I get a cough, my mother always gives me medicine to cure it. On the other hand, the doctors who work in our city hospital look at details to find the reason which makes me sick. The workers have their professional skills and they can solve our problems immediately.
Definitely, some people may state that solving problems by ourselves can encourage us to become an independent person. However, some crucial situations are hard to solve without assistance. For example, education, the medical system or the safety society cannot be contracted easily by one person or one family. To conclude, it is necessary that people must solve the most important problems in their lives by searching for resources and assistance from the government.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, second, so, third, even so, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97771587744 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75032930099 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520891364903 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4662211927 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.35 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.95 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30387837684 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860993430774 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097421481661 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179019208541 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108086037401 0.0645574589148 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.